I can understand why it was rejected by Yuri Hime. It lacks a firm structure. Both characters are cute and it was off to a good start, but then the timeskip made things confusing. Hair suddenly became super-important, even though the emphasis was not really on it in the first part.
But if some editor had reworked it, I think it would have had its place in Yuri Hime.
I disagree people in relationships argue of small things all the time. She isn't noticing the short hair just now! It just a tick the older character has. We just witness a small glimpse into their lives. I didnt find the subject very important but rather just everyday life. Some of the conclusions are reaching
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