The Scottish accent is clever seeing it seems to fit her personality (from what I've seen), but that said, I am an American who has watched a bunch of UK stuff. Just please never do Welsh, I don't think they even understand it.
As for talk of a Midwestern accent, I'm from the Midwest, and I feel the only thing special we do is speak with hard vowels. Oh, and call soda "pop."
About the actual chapter content, ego trip group members seem like the type of folks who enjoy wafting in their own farts and then discussing the brew. That part made me laugh, the only thing that could have made it better is if they threw around the word "synergy" in English.
Thank you for picking this up again and translating! I'm digging it so far.