I reallt hate when people act entitled...

Don't think for a second that people giving criticism don't are "entitled" and don't understand what it takes to create a good translation.

We do. We're critical because we know what has to be done, this translator failed to do it, and it's someone else's work that suffers for it.

last edited at Mar 31, 2018 3:36PM

That was more impressive than Luffy's tooth.

BlueBerry posted:
Well Sacchan did say the L word in the end[...]

. . . Lesbian?

The other L word.

His manipulative confession was shitty, but I was willing to give him a second chance. Then he blew it with the gaslighting in the last panel. Even if it's played for humor, I've seen it too many times to laugh at it.

last edited at Mar 30, 2018 3:15AM

Kenta you piece of shit.

Also, "Hella" seems to me like some regular English word.

It's currently very common slang, but quite recent--I don't think anyone ever said "hella" before max 10 years ago unless they were talking about the Norse death goddess.

Yeah, I see it used plenty still. I think the issue is that it just doesn't fit the character.

What's with all the cussing? And the use of weird words? I feel like this was localized by a 7th grader.

Obscene words. Well, sorry, but i don't have any problems with them, actually i really love them. These are the language's instruments to express strong emotions and i see no reasons not to use them, especially when it's already 18+.

You may use obscenities, and you may be in an environment where they're acceptable. But that doesn't necessarily mean the character would, or that swearing fits within the story. In the first chapter Rena is established as mature and professional; she isn't the kind of person that would frequently use vulgar speech (even in her own head). Even when Rena would use obscenities, she'd probably use different ones than you.

last edited at Mar 30, 2018 2:52AM

I repeat:

Sensei is a goddamn hero.

On an unrelated note, I really, really hope Torako doesn't pull a Lennie.

last edited at Mar 30, 2018 2:43AM

I am highly interested in ponytail!Marisa.

tfw you can't keep up with your own gay

last edited at Mar 29, 2018 10:41PM

I could've sworn the thumbnail was Reimu x Marisa...

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An editor and a quality controller or two would help.

Dynasty's Discord server has a section for scanlators to help each other out. I recommend sharing your works in progress there and getting feedback before publishing them fully.

last edited at Mar 29, 2018 4:51PM

The tone and style shift between the previous chapter's translation and this one's is jarring, and what they've changed to doesn't quite fit the story.

The awkward wording and numerous typos aren't helping things, either.

I just noticed the gifts have same relative shapes as the girls.

Oh yeah, forgot to mention I was also surprised that the story with cutesy Animal Crossing-esque character designs went s̶t̶r̶a̶i̶g̶h̶t for a sex scene three chapters in.

last edited at Mar 28, 2018 2:28AM

Huh. I was surprised to see that Marie is taller than Alice. There hasn't been a good comparative shot of their heights up until now, and all this time I was under the impression it was the other way around.

Also, excellent foreshadowing.

last edited at Mar 27, 2018 4:27PM

"More specifically, the party takes place in her pants, and I've already RSVP'ed."

Hot damn, adult Mimika is easy on the eyes.

From zero to thirsty-ass lesbian in three seconds flat.

Three yanderes enter

one yandere gets to go out with a loser girl.

I still don't like seeing people refer to Touma as a player. "Player" implies insincerity and betrayal.

Touma has been completely up-front and honest about her feelings. When asked in the first chapter, she openly admits to Karen that she has intimate relationships with many women. In this chapter, Yuki asks for an exclusive relationship, and Touma politely declines. No lies, no stringing along.

I'd like to point out the stark contrast between Yuki turning down her classmate and Touma turning down Yuki: the former was Yuki thinking less of someone and dismissing them as unworthy, the latter was Touma admitting she wasn't capable of giving Yuki the commitment she was asking for.

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last edited at Mar 23, 2018 5:12AM

Chii's cognizant, calculated seduction has very slight tinges of coercion that make me just a bit uneasy.

Yeah agreed. Chii rubs me the wrong way at times.

A large part of it is that Haru is just so submissive. I would feel a lot better if she had some level of confidence and self-determination in the relationship. I get it, Haru is the demure maiden to be swept off her feet by Chii's domineering advances. But seeing Haru give at least a little push back with Chii responding in some way that acknowledges Haru's agency would make me more comfortable with their relationship.

last edited at Mar 23, 2018 4:51AM

Meanwhile, the real Arai-san and Fennec are just kinda staring at each other awkwardly and blushing.

I kept hitting the next button expecting that page to happen...

tfw you're surprised, angry, and horny at the same time.

That'll do, Mimika.

That'll do.