I'm actually really impressed by the art. Like the body positions are really well drawn!

Now this was nice to read. Before this was some weird, cringy nikoxmaki doujin that made me want to bleach my eyes

This story reminded me of the song "It's over isn't it?" sung by Pearl in Steven Universe.

I was fine with the men who would come into her life now and again.
I was fine cause I knew that they didn't really matter, until you.
I was fine when you came and we fought like it was all some silly game.
Over her, who she choose.
After all those years I never thought I'd lose...

If the story was stretched out and simplified then it would've made more sense. The art is fine (don't know why everyone complains when every artist draws differently...). The story did feel like all of it was compressed into a limited amount of pages, when it could've easily filled like 40+ pages of plot. The only thing that confused me were the characters, as in everyone would mention names and I didn't know who the heck they were talking to. But I wouldn't mind reading the continuation.

Velma Dinkley does not approve of your interspecies lesbian shenanigans.

Great to know I wasn't the only one to think the same thing.

I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS!

Clap clap clap clap!!!! There's a lot of artworks showing Nico at Maki's bottom, or being tsundere with Nozomi. But this vengeful, strong girl is the best Nico, by far.

I like this comment.

Less queer struggles; more queer snuggles!

I love everything about this.

Omg I used to eat those 'chuppettos' ice pops as a kid back in puerto rico! :o
We call them 'esquimalitos'. The name also applies to all the example pictures too. Weirdly I haven't seen that kind of ice pop anywhere in the US.

ouch

Ouch indeed.

I loved this story, but... Is it weird if I mention that the president looks awfully a lot like my mom in Comaku's art style...

A situation similar as this one happened to my girlfriend years ago when we started dating. She wasn't into guys but because of the culture we grew up in she wanted to see if she really disliked guys or not. So one day she went out with a guy friend and it was all fine at first, until he got a little too touchy feely and she basically pushed him away and she called another friend to pick her up and take her home. She later came to me saying how she felt disgusted and how she never wanted to go out with men. I remember how she kept telling how much she loves me and wanted to be with just me. And we've been together ever since, for almost 6 and a half years, and counting.

Fucking really... That damn "I don't know" got me so mad.

That credits page! :D

Same! I need that picture without credits.

Holy heck.. That was freaking hot... fans self

That last part made me physically gasp lol!

Maki and Niko's comments compliment eachother very well lol.

I gotta say I somewhat disagree with a lot of the comments here. I actually enjoyed the story even though it was just to extend the drama. Sure the one-shot what better off left alone, but after reading each chapter I was always looking forward to reading the next one. And that's saying a lot when I read stories- if something doesn't really catch my attention from the start I drop the entire thing. Anyways I found the story to be a good read. My only complain is that the story was finished quite abruptly on ch.5, I wanted to know what happened next after building quite a little story there.

faannggss
Also very cute story :)

I was legit expecting some egg laying lol.

Wouldn't this be a yuri crush tag and not yuri because the other girl doesn't feel the same way?

@Sharkexpert12 Omg I've been to their shows too but I don't trust checking Dynasty while watching the show lol. I've read almost explicit fanfics right before the show tho.

Also it doesn't help that Anna is complaining when she's being such a messy eater. Plus arousing Elsa isn't gonna help get the blood out any easier... Elsa needs to be relaxed for the blood to be able to flow out better. Dammit Anna you idiot.

@Ropponmatsu Hey!! I'm not the only who thought about that :D I was about to write that vampires liking mestrual blood has been done before lol.

Man her jealousy took her to dark places..
But I overall enjoyed the story. Was just a bit caugh off guard by the whole 'wishing her talented fingers to be horribly crushed' moments. When her hand got smacked by the rear view mirror I thought that was another of her dark schemes, but was actually real.
I feel like the transition from 'just a thought' to 'an actual scenario' wasn't properly executed. So when it happened I was confused, I wasn't sure if that particular scene was real or not.