Dear Akis, this is just too erotic to bear. Okuu and Orin's expression, their poses, and that teasing cape hanging over Okuu's wings. Just breathtaking.
Interesting. Given that they're both described as witches, this is the first time I've seen someone give Marisa and Alice the ability to transform into cats.
Finally, a Kanako/Suwako doujin that isn't H and where the two of them have a mutual, friendly relationship. Also one where Suwako is actually a mother figure towards Sanae.
You know what to do with that, Yukari... ^_^
Also, it's really nice to see a Yukari pairing where the other side is aggressive enough to get Yukari to show her delicate feminine side.
I agree with the others; the story is a little hard to follow and jumps from place to place. The story itself is very sweet and very beautiful. If this work had just a bit more polish, it would've been perfect, but as it stands, it's still excellent.