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colboh
Image Comments 09 Nov 14:11
Yuuparu%20cuddle
joined Apr 7, 2013
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It is blood. It must be Miko's first time...

colboh
Yuuparu%20cuddle
joined Apr 7, 2013

Oh, yes, just adorable Marisa/Alice, with the both of them the way I like it.

colboh
Yuuparu%20cuddle
joined Apr 7, 2013

I agree with the others; the story is a little hard to follow and jumps from place to place. The story itself is very sweet and very beautiful. If this work had just a bit more polish, it would've been perfect, but as it stands, it's still excellent.