with the emphasis on trying.
The only chapter where blondie doesn't look like the maniac is this one, yeah, sure, it all seems to pay off in the end but honestly, what was so bad about her work-aholic attitude that she needed to change? A few shitty co-workers talking behind her back and some text-only neglectence of ones own beauty for a woman that never stopped being beautiful. Though holy shit, she does look better but that could just be the mood of the story
The flashbacks are far more subtle in showing her loneliness, being on the clock around christmas and not really having anyone to talk to.
So yeah, nice try, but that could have been so much better in the first three chapters already, the author either got feedback or just restrains their talent for no reason.
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