Dunno, I'm too skeptical on this.
The art style is terrible. It is not the level of amateur like Tamamusi used to be (which is just cute and charming).
Also the story is pretty... abrupt?
It is lacking something.
But well, I don't mind continue reading this.
I quite like the art style actually, what's so terrible about it?
I'll be honest, I don't see anything especially wrong with the art here either. Yes, it's not Lily Love or Tima's works, but it's not Miniature Garden Cosmos either. I think it would be better if there were more attention to the backgrounds, but there's nothing inherently bad about the characters themselves. I rather like Takagi's look, in fact.
Maybe I didn't express myself correctly. True, some people have amateurish art style, but I do know that a lot of original Yuri are doujins, which are usually drawn by non-professional artists. However, even so, the art style of an amateur has its own charm (like Tamamusi's old stuffs, look sketchy but not really choppy and weird). I also don't fuss so much on body proportions, as long as it looks natural enough.
However, in this series, you can easily see some terrible drawings. Without nitpicking, I can see page 36 (that weird elbow, no, seriously, try to pose it, it is weird), page 56 (Mochida's right arm in top-right panel is... a few inches too long?), page 63 (that hug scene is also weird, and those hands are rough - similar hands can be seen throughout the story), page 64 (the hug lacks some contact, dunno, she is supposed to be drunk and she just dragged her crush on bed, it is weird to have some distance). If just me nitpicking, I can see page 39, 40, 47, 53, 57 which are also... bad.
I have terrible art myself, so I can tell that the artist's style is somewhat similar to mine. Same weird hands, body proportions, poses and choppy flow.
It might be weird to say this, but the art lacks depth and emotion to draw out the charm for the story.
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