she goes to some music event concert randomly looking for a dancer to teach her and then she sees a women kicking a can and she think of course this is a dance expert...
Yeah, the plot here seems kind of forced. Deflecting an airborne beer can and kicking it into the trash sounds more like football or hackey sack than dancing. Trust me when I say it's very possible to be a good soccer player, kick-ass hackey sacker, and awful at dancing all at the same time.
Instead of jumping straight from that to "Oh, she must be an amazing dancer," it would've been less jarring and more believable to have that simply pique the protagonist's (and the reader's) interest in Ming, and then lead that increased attention into a second event that more explicitly and dramatically reveals her dancing skill.
Kinda hard to show fluid motion in a comic. Just pretend she did it extremely gracefully.
The hallmark of a skilled craftsman (be it a painter, a draftsman, a musician, a photographer, even an athlete or laborer) is the ability to take something difficult and making it look easy.
Even before that, to be a competent artist you need to convey your ideas at least somewhat clearly through the medium you're utilizing. The text here talks about the characters moving and dancing in certain ways (gracefully or otherwise), but the drawings fail to communicate it.
The art is good, but it has some seriously rough edges. Between that and the stilted writing, I'm having trouble staying motivated to read through all of the chapters here (I'm up to chapter 7 or something).
Bro, no one has a gun to your head.
