If you're reading a h-doujin and expecting a substantial plot or realistic anatomy, you're probably not the author's target audience.

I thought it was fine tbh

That's fair and true. Just wish the artwork was better since that's all it has going for it. I guess the porn too but I don't care much for that either since I only read partway through it for the ship.

I love me some Eri/Umi stuff but this doujin sucked.

The artwork was the absolute worst, the artist rarely diverged from the usual slightly turned face and they all looked the same. Perspectives were fucked and the anatomy was terrible at times. Same facial expressions and the characters looked incredibly stiff. Had to stop myself from reading because of the cliché and boring writing. Overall, if you enjoyed it and the art, good for you but I hated it. Just had to express my thoughts :^[

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Hopefully Satake finds some love because damn, must hurt being cast away like that lmao...

Honestly, I personally don't romantically like people so seeing a protagonist who shares a lot of thoughts and feelings on romance like me is quite nice.

My criticism is pretty much the same as everyone else's. Too fast paced and we barely get time to connect with the dying characters. No exposition on what the fuck is going on other than them waking up chained to another person and going around killing because reasons.
By the by, how come the grenade has such a small radius??? I'm sorry but I'm disappointed that this is so poorly thought out and presented.

Alas it won't stop me from reading it because I'm a sucker for this type of shit lmfao. Even if it's poorly executed I will still read it :')