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joined Mar 15, 2015

I could have sworn that I saw this before, but judging from the Duplicate tag, it's not just my imagination.

This is another one-shot that's a nice enough read but doesn't really go anywhere.

last edited at May 31, 2022 4:44PM

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joined Nov 9, 2017

It doesn't? Did we read the same thing?

Roodypatooti
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joined Feb 11, 2022

“M’lady”, really? Ugh. Guess I’ll just read the SAD version again instead.

joined May 23, 2022

Soooo cute. Wish there was more T_T

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joined Sep 23, 2021

funny, i was just reading the other version of this earlier today...i think i preferred that translation if i'm honest. i don't even know, it might be super literal and i don't wanna slam the TLers hard work but the way the delivery girl's dialect is rendered in this one comes across as a bit over the top to me? like, in a way that doesn't really fit the tone of the story.

story itself is still super cute tho, love that role reversal scene as well.

last edited at May 31, 2022 5:06PM

BoobTwinkler
Sleepyfrogwaifutiny
joined Sep 25, 2019

Personally, I really dig this translation. I wouldn't say it's "better" or "worse" just different, with a charm all its own.

last edited at May 31, 2022 5:29PM

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joined Mar 20, 2013

Roodypatooti posted:

“M’lady”, really? Ugh. Guess I’ll just read the SAD version again instead.

Why don't we like "M'lady"?

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joined Mar 21, 2017

Roodypatooti posted:

“M’lady”, really? Ugh. Guess I’ll just read the SAD version again instead.

Why don't we like "M'lady"?

They just don't like going to crazy town.

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joined Oct 30, 2021

Gotta be honest not even i knew why she was mad until i saw the message in the sugar XD

Weiwei
joined Oct 9, 2017

Butch/Fem reversal is the best. Always. :D

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joined Apr 20, 2013

Only cool people like her could've pulled the M'lady technique without the fedora tip... It's really advanced stuff, very effective.
Miku !!! sooo cuteeeeeeee!! I usually stay away from oneshots but this author is irresistible

joined Feb 15, 2019

Even as a duplicate story I like the fact that this translation is a little different than the other one.

Lilisionnach
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joined Feb 3, 2021

"You can go for as many servings as you want"...well hot damn!!

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joined Apr 20, 2013

Lilisionnach posted:

"You can go for as many servings as you want"...well hot damn!!

Ikr? that's a lot of donuts... too many calories

180
joined Mar 21, 2017

Lilisionnach posted:

"You can go for as many servings as you want"...well hot damn!!

Ikr? that's a lot of donuts... too many calories

They can always burn it off after.

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joined Apr 25, 2020

So that was the meaning of that "duplicate" tag

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joined Nov 13, 2017

As part of the religion I am currently creating, one of the tenets will be that wholesome things like girls realizing their feelings towards each other will be considered blessed (as long as it is mutual).

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It's so rare to see two very high quality releases of the same story. I'm very happy that this was done (again!), and equally happy to have another excuse to come back to this one! Now if only I could pick a favourite version between the two...

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Miowink
joined Aug 21, 2020

Still cute, just like last time.

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joined Jan 9, 2017

Hey baby, do you like my... Car!

joined Sep 6, 2018

So that was the meaning of that "duplicate" tag

Somebody translated it or published it with touch-ups before this one. There might be some minor art-tweaks or improved translations in the second one.

A good one shot, again.

joined Aug 21, 2017

Very sweet, like the sugar packet she wrote her number on.

Sayaka_ava
joined Nov 23, 2014

I definitely think the previous version was more natural sounding in places where this one might be a bit more literal, but they both have their charm. Always nice to read this one again at any rate.

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joined Mar 4, 2018

The original was def better. Still, I'm thinking Miku, Miku, ooeeoo.

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