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Hijikini deleted it because of some negative reactions for adding a molester in the story. The scene is on the busy train and some ugly old guy unhooks hinoka's bra. Tsukushi rescued her quickly but the man received no punishment in the end. Tho I think its supposed to have a continuation. But hijiki already deleted it and decided to create a different plot for Hinoka and Tsukushi in the future chapters. It's a little sad because the deleted chapter have 8 pages. But I'm still fine with it since I'm really disturb with the theme lol.

Not a fan of authors changing their works due to backlash in general, but I see how it would have clashed big time with the feel of the story so far. Geez, Chikan really is creepy.

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(bangs fists on table)

CUTE IDIOTS ONLY

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Hijikini deleted it because of some negative reactions for adding a molester in the story. The scene is on the busy train and some ugly old guy unhooks hinoka's bra. Tsukushi rescued her quickly but the man received no punishment in the end. Tho I think its supposed to have a continuation. But hijiki already deleted it and decided to create a different plot for Hinoka and Tsukushi in the future chapters. It's a little sad because the deleted chapter have 8 pages. But I'm still fine with it since I'm really disturb with the theme lol.

OK, then it's kinda understandable, since, as Zormau said in his reply, this does clash with the general feel of the story thus far.

joined Mar 24, 2021

I think I managed to see the continuation (at least it was marked 2/2). It was after they both left the train and Tsukushi seemed to comfort Hinoka and hug her, with some blushing during the hug, I think there was mention to the bra being unhooked which may have been what prompted the blushing. My Japanese is terrible though and I only know very few kanjis, so I may be completely off base with what happened. I also only skimmed it sadly, as I was waiting on the translation. Sad to read it was taken down though understandable, I suppose.

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joined Oct 15, 2014

I think I managed to see the continuation (at least it was marked 2/2). It was after they both left the train and Tsukushi seemed to comfort Hinoka and hug her, with some blushing during the hug, I think there was mention to the bra being unhooked which may have been what prompted the blushing. My Japanese is terrible though and I only know very few kanjis, so I may be completely off base with what happened. I also only skimmed it sadly, as I was waiting on the translation. Sad to read it was taken down though understandable, I suppose.

The 2/2 was technically because it was eight pages over two tweets.
I got the written translation here: https://pastebin.com/4cAjhb6S
Currently debating if it's something we should typeset or just leave in the void.
To summarise:
Tsukushi and Hinoka get seperated in a crowded train, and Tsukushi holds off on trying to squeeze past the other passengers to get to her. Then she spots chikanman and comes to her rescue, shooing him away as they leave the train. As Hinoka is reeling over the incident, Tsukushi blames herself for leaving Hinoka on her own and comforts her, at which point she discovers Hinoka's bra had been unhooked, leading Tsukushi to once again curse chikan man as she takes her to the bathroom.
I would imagine the second part would've involved some gay hijinks involving Tsukushi trying to fix Hinoka's bra, which admittedly would've caused tonal whiplash potentially worse than what the chapter itself already had.

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joined Jul 22, 2018

I got the written translation here: https://pastebin.com/4cAjhb6S
Currently debating if it's something we should typeset or just leave in the void.

Thank you very much for the translation.

I think I can guess what the mangaka might have been trying to do, namely provide a shift to a maturing, cherishing feeling between them based not on infatuation but on dealing with something hard in the world.

However, I can certainly see why it would alarm people and since I haven't seen the images, I am probably wrong.

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another useless lesbian! ugh you moron! why so dense?!

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joined Aug 27, 2021

Lol, this is exactly how I realized that I was attracted to my friend except in the dream she was coming on to me instead of rejecting me. Now we're dating so I hope this continues so I can see the same thing happen to these two :')

Yo my man hope you both of you have many fruitful years ahead!

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joined Dec 5, 2019

I feel like thighs are even worse than boobs in touching regard.

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These two give me a feeling of 'idiot couple' but then not really. It's hard to pinpoint.

Their expressions and reactions are so good.

joined Mar 24, 2021

Was this dropped by the author?

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Was this dropped by the author?

Maybe, possibly, IDK, but I hope not.

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this is the kind of gay healing i need in my life

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still waiting for the update :(

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joined Mar 26, 2021

man is this finished?

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Anyone got news on if the manga is gonna get updated?

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joined Oct 22, 2018

no

wishforasunnyday
joined Nov 13, 2021

Anyone has the author's deleted Chapter 10. I read through the discussions and learnt the Author was backslashed for adding a molester in the story. Normally I would just disagree with any kind of attack on authors but I saw many posts in this thread that agree the author should be backslashed. So I'm doubting myself now.

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Anyone has the author's deleted Chapter 10. I read through the discussions and learnt the Author was backslashed for adding a molester in the story. Normally I would just disagree with any kind of attack on authors but I saw many posts in this thread that agree the author should be backslashed. So I'm doubting myself now.

Don't think anyone indicated that "the author should receive backlash". It's an important distinction between "I can see why the fans would be upset since it clashes with the feel of the story" and "That jerk dared add a molester to my bubbly yuri fun time, drag him in front of the grand court of Twitter!"
I don't know how much backlash there was. I would have assumed the author reacted more to valid criticism as opposed to torches and pitchforms, but since apparently they haven't continued the series, it must have been quite the shock.

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It's still pinned at the top of Hijiki's twitter, so hopefully they haven't totally given up on it.

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