This is very intriguing. I can't tell what is being done in the heat of the moment and what is intentional obfuscation. And only having one of the leading ladies as a PoV character adds in the possibility of an untrustworthy narrator, so we can't even say for sure who, if anyone, to cheer for. So I guess let's just cheer for happy hate-yuri!
I..... LOVE IT! the characters are messed up, but the story is superb. the fight/sex scene(?) reminds me of LOVE/DEATH.
Really reminds me of Black Lagoon characters - a bit too messed up
I hadn't thought about Black Lagoon because I added a Yuri filter when looking for comparisons, but I can see your point.
ch. 2 really cleared up a few things for me. I honestly thought the fight scene in ch. 1 was more along the lines of some weird spy-vs-spy knockdown, dragged out type of fight. with the flashbacks, it looks to have been some really some weird ass sadistic assert one's dominance fukc-fest instead. i suppose the one question is will each woman just try to assert their dominance over the other or will they fall in love with each other?
so not trying to get spoilers out of this, but the first two chapters are so extreme, another question I have is, how will the story keep the intensity up so high without becoming predictable and repetitive?
i see it as one of two ways. either it was angry sex or it was to establish domination of one over the other.
Nothing's better than a good ol' hatefuck... except perhaps the conversations that come about the morning after the hatefuck.
LOL! I would guess they didn't have any pillow talk afterwards. besides, they destroyed the conference room they were fight/fucking in and i'm curious which one or possibly both stayed behind to clean up the debris because they wrecked that room.