should i get a cat so she can reincarnate into a wonderful girlfriend?

Rini for a name, dark skin, gamelan. I'd like to think one of the setting is in Indonesia, maybe Bali to be specific.

Rini for a name, dark skin, gamelan. I'd like to think one of the setting is in Indonesia, maybe Bali to be specific.

Wow, I'm Indonesian and I don't even realize it hahaha. I thought it was in hawaii or something

OMG why is this so cuuuteee???!!!
<3
loved it

This is fantastic. Dark skin yuri a best.
Is there some nuance to the 'good-for-nothing' line in the original text? I understand what it's getting at but it did seem kind of harsh even in context.

Title page/artwork is missing (it’s blank).

Page 20: “Then why don’t you spend your last day here going a date with me?”

Should really be:
“...going on a date with me?”

That’s the most blatant error but there are others.

It’s a good story. My corrections will hopefully improve on it. Keep up the good work. I’d like to see a sequel or two.

This was a nice one

This was nice I liked it

My corrections will hopefully improve on it.

The cover page was blank in the raws.
Page 20 doesn't say that.

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I wished i met a hot foreigner who resembled my dog when it died. I did met a foreigner when it died and the place i met him in was pretty hot, but he didn't resemble my dog or was attractive at all. Anyways, nice read, a little fast-paced though.

the jump rini made from scamming a girl to literally leaving everything she had to be with said girl was a very large leap for me lol. very cute regardless.

Rini was cool, the other one felt a bit...weak. I didn't see the connection between these two. Dark skin is always nice though.

Cute. A sequel would be great

I wish I had a cat

should i get a cat so she can reincarnate into a wonderful girlfriend?

I'm gonna get one anyway.
Also "Don't you want me?" god fucking damn it, that was hot.

This is good!

Not bad, not bad at all.

I just cried a lot, when i think that one day my cat will die too...
It is a really nice and cute story I liked it very much but it also hurt a lot...
Well it's life, when you take a pet you know that it will die before you.

And if after i can have in my life someone has purrfect as riri then ok ^^

Yuri Jesus blessed me today as well.

Rini for a name, dark skin, gamelan. I'd like to think one of the setting is in Indonesia, maybe Bali to be specific.

The whole time I'm like "is this bali" "they look indonesian" "it must be bali"
Indonesian lesbian rise (ﾉ･ｪ･)ﾉ

A wonderful one shot to make my day shine a little brighter.

Rini for a name, dark skin, gamelan. I'd like to think one of the setting is in Indonesia, maybe Bali to be specific.

Nah i just think the same XD

My corrections will hopefully improve on it.

The cover page was blank in the raws.
Page 20 doesn't say that.

Ok. I must be off by one page, the dialogue needs an extra word in there. Thanks for responding quickly.

That was sweet.

It's not easy to make me cry, but holy fuck that introduction was just... I have 3 cats, had 4 until a year ago... And I sure as hell spent a good month down in the dumps too.