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joined Nov 26, 2017

should i get a cat so she can reincarnate into a wonderful girlfriend?

033
joined Sep 11, 2014

Rini for a name, dark skin, gamelan. I'd like to think one of the setting is in Indonesia, maybe Bali to be specific.

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joined Nov 26, 2017

Rini for a name, dark skin, gamelan. I'd like to think one of the setting is in Indonesia, maybe Bali to be specific.

Wow, I'm Indonesian and I don't even realize it hahaha. I thought it was in hawaii or something

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joined Apr 2, 2017

OMG why is this so cuuuteee???!!!
<3
loved it

Dynav
joined Aug 6, 2013

This is fantastic. Dark skin yuri a best.
Is there some nuance to the 'good-for-nothing' line in the original text? I understand what it's getting at but it did seem kind of harsh even in context.

joined Sep 6, 2018

Title page/artwork is missing (it’s blank).

Page 20: “Then why don’t you spend your last day here going a date with me?”

Should really be:
“...going on a date with me?”

That’s the most blatant error but there are others.

It’s a good story. My corrections will hopefully improve on it. Keep up the good work. I’d like to see a sequel or two.

006
joined Jan 26, 2017

This was a nice one

joined Jan 5, 2018

This was nice I liked it

joined Nov 1, 2018

My corrections will hopefully improve on it.

The cover page was blank in the raws.
Page 20 doesn't say that.

last edited at Nov 22, 2018 2:53AM

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joined Oct 15, 2016

I wished i met a hot foreigner who resembled my dog when it died. I did met a foreigner when it died and the place i met him in was pretty hot, but he didn't resemble my dog or was attractive at all. Anyways, nice read, a little fast-paced though.

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joined May 30, 2018

the jump rini made from scamming a girl to literally leaving everything she had to be with said girl was a very large leap for me lol. very cute regardless.

Ewe
joined Jan 22, 2017

Rini was cool, the other one felt a bit...weak. I didn't see the connection between these two. Dark skin is always nice though.

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joined Jul 22, 2018

Cute. A sequel would be great

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joined Mar 10, 2018

I wish I had a cat

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joined Jul 27, 2015

should i get a cat so she can reincarnate into a wonderful girlfriend?

I'm gonna get one anyway.
Also "Don't you want me?" god fucking damn it, that was hot.

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joined Nov 5, 2017

This is good!

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

Not bad, not bad at all.

628
joined May 9, 2011

I just cried a lot, when i think that one day my cat will die too...
It is a really nice and cute story I liked it very much but it also hurt a lot...
Well it's life, when you take a pet you know that it will die before you.

And if after i can have in my life someone has purrfect as riri then ok ^^

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joined Feb 7, 2013

Yuri Jesus blessed me today as well.

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joined May 12, 2015

Rini for a name, dark skin, gamelan. I'd like to think one of the setting is in Indonesia, maybe Bali to be specific.

The whole time I'm like "is this bali" "they look indonesian" "it must be bali"
Indonesian lesbian rise (ノ・ェ・)ノ

Sumire
joined Feb 9, 2017

A wonderful one shot to make my day shine a little brighter.

joined Sep 19, 2018

Rini for a name, dark skin, gamelan. I'd like to think one of the setting is in Indonesia, maybe Bali to be specific.

Nah i just think the same XD

joined Sep 6, 2018

My corrections will hopefully improve on it.

The cover page was blank in the raws.
Page 20 doesn't say that.

Ok. I must be off by one page, the dialogue needs an extra word in there. Thanks for responding quickly.

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joined Jun 12, 2015

That was sweet.

Nico%204
joined May 26, 2015

It's not easy to make me cry, but holy fuck that introduction was just... I have 3 cats, had 4 until a year ago... And I sure as hell spent a good month down in the dumps too.

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