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joined May 28, 2011

pg 44, "It's you usual" - your usual

pg 45, "reading you husband's" - your husband's

pg 55, "copulate with woman." - copulate with women

pg 62, "having child" - having children

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Steve-buscemi
joined Jul 2, 2017

this dialogue is...not good. Even by porn standards.

Cat
joined Jan 21, 2015

A little too mind-control/rapey for me

Yuu
joined Mar 28, 2015

"Let's have sexy preggo sex again".

Whatever. The premise is interesting (like the Eden no otome manga), but the execution is trash.

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joined Aug 30, 2013

"Let's have sexy preggo sex again".

Whatever. The premise is interesting (like the Eden no otome manga), but the execution is trash.

Agreed.

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joined May 20, 2013

pg 44, "It's you usual" - your usual

pg 45, "reading you husband's" - your husband's

pg 55, "copulate with woman." - copulate with women

pg 62, "having child" - having children

pg 46, "Nanao" vs pg 53 & 57, "Nanami"

Other than that being confusing (and reminding me of YagaKimi), I agree with the other comments...

The way the guy was involved throughout the story (first the link to staying straight, then complete ignorance), the school orgy scene, and the indiscriminate fertilization made the story unpleasant. (The art is fairly standard for this kind of manga, as far as I know. Too bad any talent is wasted on stories – developing – like this. The other one isn't much better either.)

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joined Feb 28, 2015

sexy preggo sex

Gt00pn-odpc
joined Sep 30, 2017

"Let's have sexy preggo sex again"

What the fuck.....

Ewe
joined Jan 22, 2017

I can't stand those oversized breasts. e.e Art would be fine otherwise.

TifalovesAerith
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joined May 7, 2017

Yes, a masterpiece and the perfect world, Momiji-sama.

Tag%20rock%20snake
joined Aug 16, 2014

Man, this one was a bit too close to NTR for my liking

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joined Nov 16, 2017

I'm fine with this guilty pleasure

Ioruu%20dr
joined Jul 13, 2014

Well, I mean, it's Yamada Gogogo, after all.

joined Apr 22, 2018

I always love when short haired cool girl take the lead

Sakura Cartelet
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joined May 28, 2016

While the dialog wasn't that good it still was worth reading... I guess?

Shigure%20beach
joined Oct 18, 2017

Man, this one was a bit too close to NTR for my liking

I'm very sensitive to NTR but i think this is far from it. The link with Kenji just seems like one of those vague 'friendships' between childhood friends. Not a normal friendship but far from lovers either. So it's far from NTR.

I want to question who added the cheating tag. In my opinion, this doesnt need it all. Perhaps its the result of someone's over-reaction. This feels more like harem or just lesbian orgy than cheating.

It's very corny, yes, but i like it a lot. Sometimes it is nice to read something like this.

last edited at Aug 26, 2018 12:18AM

joined Jan 29, 2017

This should be under "what the fuck did I just read."

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joined Sep 1, 2017

This story would have been way better, with more story, less over the top sex. Something more along the lines of Mira's The Heir of the Curse. the Story would have been more enjoyable, if Wakana's feelings for Momiji, were not completely drug induced. as well. Also ditching the whole orgy thing would have been a massive improvement.
It would have been cool if Wakana was the one to get pregnant. Kenji could have been a minor character. He could have appeared at the beginning, treating Wakana like crap. Then at the end Wakana could reject him face to face, revealing her pregnancy. I see an image of Wakana, standing in front of Kenji, looking down, while she rubs her swollen belly. A small content smile on her face, as she tells the jerk goodbye.
I could have done without the exaggerated art work. I can't undrstand some artist need to draw girls with disproportionately large breasts. Do they think that's sexy? Because it just looks ridiculous, to me.
In short, I think Yamada Gogogo waisted a decent story premise, on crappily drawn, lazily written porn.

Edit: It was Nagashiro Rouge, that wrote The Heir of the Curse. Not Mira. My bad.

last edited at Dec 8, 2018 12:18AM

C2731dea4191b182ecd8f18498562a84
joined Sep 1, 2017

Man, this one was a bit too close to NTR for my liking

I'm very sensitive to NTR but i think this is far from it. The link with Kenji just seems like one of those vague 'friendships' between childhood friends. Not a normal friendship but far from lovers either. So it's far from NTR.

I agree, using drugs to sexually enslave a girl, and crush a budding innocent romance, is way more like the plot of a cheap hentai than NTR.

joined Mar 22, 2017

this dialogue is...not good. Even by porn standards.

Yup it pretty bad

joined Jan 26, 2019

As a person who likes mind control porn, I liked this despite the problems

Zoommm%20(2)
joined Nov 20, 2018

what did i just read

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joined Mar 15, 2019

WHF did I read? and see?
It-it-it-iiiit's dangerous! So BIG breast!!!!
Warning!!! Women are not cows!!!! (freaky fantasies of artist....)

joined Dec 30, 2018

WHF did I read? and see?
It-it-it-iiiit's dangerous! So BIG breast!!!!
Warning!!! Women are not cows!!!! (freaky fantasies of artist....)

Idk why but the phrase Women are not cows followed by freaky fantasies of artist cracks me up so much

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