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joined Jun 25, 2019

I'm not sure why you'd eat the one becoming a zombie, wouldn't you rather become a zombie first?

Cause it's an error, i checked the french translation and somehow here they change sense for some reason (mistake ?).

In french Saori said she would let Shizuku bite her so they can be zombies together more precisely "so we can stay together" and in page 4, it's "She let me ate her with a smile".

Makes more sense. I'm not sure what I expected, given the translator's usual quality.

I checked the original too, and Windyfall's translation is accurate.

The French translator probably "fixed" the dialogue for it to make more sense, but it's really:

  • Saori says she would eat Shizuku, so they can be zombies together
  • Shizuku dreams that she had become a zombie and that Saori ate her while smiling.

"eating her" sounds odd, because it's not how you usually get zombified, but it's because you're supposed to run away from zombies. Saori would seek out Shizuku and "eat" some part of her to become a zombie (and not wait passively to be biten).

So this time, Windyfall is correct.

I stick with the one making sense.

The problem is that it changes completely the dynamics of the relationship.

It's Shizuku's dream. That Saori would let Shizuku eat her with a smile doesn't make sense.

It's Shizuku who gets eaten by Saori and "doesn't feel that bad" about it.

On a symbolic level, it says it all about their relationship.

You talk to someone who don't understand dynamic and honestly this chapter will probably never been referenced again by the character so.
Also i prefer logic over power dynamic for that specific situation.

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joined Jul 29, 2017

The most rigorous logic and adherence to verisimilitude must always be followed in regard to [checks notes] the mechanics of turning into a zombie.

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46-75
joined Jun 25, 2019

I don't know why you feel the need to be sarcastic here.

46-75
joined Jun 25, 2019

I don't know what the point and i frankly don't care so moving on.

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joined Apr 23, 2021

don't go around making your gay ones sad now, that ain't nice

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joined Aug 18, 2021

Heke and Shinohara are so cute oml TT best couple for me

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joined May 5, 2022

aww this one's cute )))

Eyyy
joined Sep 11, 2020

God, they're the best couple

I want a comic that's just nothing but them, and I want a lot of it

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joined Sep 27, 2017

Stop, no, don't cover it up, kiss her instead!

joined May 29, 2021

This must be back before they hooked up in the side stories I guess.

last edited at Sep 27, 2022 9:37PM

joined Sep 6, 2018

Chapter 81: Ahhh, yesss, the challenges of dating your boss. I don’t think this relationship will last. A power dynamic will ruin it… if I was the editor’s boss, I’d get her reassigned to supervise other artists. But this is a manga (meaning: suspend reality) and I’m thinking in my mind: “Awww, poor wittle girl got her feewings hurt.”

Keep up the good work!

last edited at Sep 27, 2022 11:52PM

Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

And you thought Evie was dense... I have no idea how it was possible to cover it up after that move...

Sena
joined Jun 27, 2017

I know some people object to the violence in this series ... but those two desperately need some sense smacked into them :p

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joined Mar 4, 2018

Don't mislead that poor pumpkin. Look how crestfallen she is. For shame!

Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

Someone is starting to fall...

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joined Apr 23, 2021

Someone is starting to fall...

But didn't fall start already?

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joined Mar 20, 2014

I find it mildly disconcerting how Mikanuji's universe is filled with emotionally stunted weirdos.

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joined Apr 15, 2013

I find it mildly disconcerting how Mikanuji's universe is filled with emotionally stunted weirdos.

You say that as though the real world isn't.

joined May 29, 2021

I feel called out.

Onee2
joined Apr 28, 2022

Someone is really starting to get hot for teacher aren't they.

For some reason it took me forever to read this and just read all 82 so far in like 30min. No idea what took me so long as I love it. The side couples are just as great as the main one. On to the side stories one next.

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joined Dec 18, 2013

Rare moment of Iori worrying about their relationship

Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

If even Cuba can do it, surely one day you'll be able to get married as well.

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