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appbeza
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I lost interest when she said 'we need to change that style of your. You think you can act a little bit more feminine?' What really ticks me off is the 'act' part.

The bully part in Chapter 1 was handled poorly. That was definitely bullying. The 'are you a lesbian or something?!' at the end of that chapter didn't really do anything either.

I feel like this is trying to be fluffy but is very rough. Also the chacters don't feel alive to me; their actions, words, and character development seem a bit out of place and rushed.

last edited at May 3, 2020 12:37AM

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Oh my gosh, waiting for the next chapter is killing me!

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With the experience of reading a gazillion fanfics of all qualities, I think I'm gonna skip this one.

last edited at Dec 25, 2019 10:17PM

appbeza
Image Comments 06 Dec 23:29
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Compersion!

appbeza
Shabon discussion 21 Aug 06:15
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Need more cycling in yuri!

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"You two on the bike! Stop at the side of the road!!11! No passengers. Dangerous!"

This class of aggression has been going on for a loooong time; as exampled: https://i.imgur.com/hOsvoYg.jpg

That bike looks like it has a completely welding on rack. Very strong. It is like riding on a moped, albeit less comfortable, and at a much lower speed (meaning impact energy is exponentially lower as K.E = 0.5mv^2). And the speeds and volumes are low on Japanese access roads so those streets are pretty safe.

Also these videos will give that driver a nightmare ;P

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BqkDiExIEiE

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g4jBpdTicRI

last edited at Jul 19, 2019 9:30PM

appbeza
Image Comments 15 Mar 07:42
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It's still polyamory when their relationship is a V.

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Image Comments 03 Jan 04:51
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"One of us! One of us!" But wholesome, not tragic.

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The pacing is just amazing :')

appbeza
MOON LIGHT discussion 17 Jul 08:02
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Pages 9-14 were cute and had great atmosphere. The rest had all-over-the-place pacing.

last edited at Jul 17, 2018 8:03AM

appbeza
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No way this is subtext. They are falling in love one foot at a time. Their reactions to each other are pretty blunt.

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Their Story discussion 04 Jul 04:03
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The '........' smile at the end <3

appbeza
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The story's pacing is soooo gooooood! It amplifies the cuteness in just the right way <3

appbeza
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Yeah exactly. It's just really, really, gay. Like extremely gay. Gay to the power of infinite rainbows.
And I absolutely love it.

I think I'm gonna vomit.

Same. When people talk like this, it always reminds me of cringey tumblr people.

Also: Jesus Christ. How many times are they gonna repeat that they are best friends and lovers? <_<
I get it already. D:

I think you guys are being over-dramatic. And the 'best friends and lovers' isn't annoying at all. It's like pinching yourself when you think you are in a dream. This fact carries a lot of meaning to these girls, so it makes sense to get repeated.

When I read it, I feel strong emotion behind it. Because the reader is a part of these characters' journey.

last edited at May 4, 2018 8:30AM

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Now, this has an awesome flow to it. Scene to scene is just so smooth.

last edited at Apr 23, 2018 9:27PM

appbeza
HOME discussion 19 Apr 04:06
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Now, this hits all the right spots.

appbeza
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"Will we be merging surnames soon?"
"Will it be my surname soon?"

appbeza
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I think i like this country girl more than Kase to be honest.

Yeah, nah.

At least Hana isn’t telling Yamada what to wear or lying that lipstick doesn’t suit her ¯_(ツ)_/¯

Actually, I agree. I don't get this behavior. It doesn't suit the tone I've come to know this series for. Has something like this happened before?

If the OVA is more consistent in tone, I may consider that the actual canon.

I prefer Bloom Into You's solid narrative direction anyway, so my expectations for this series don't really shoot themselves in the foot.

last edited at Apr 6, 2018 6:13AM

appbeza
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I think i like this country girl more than Kase to be honest.

Yeah, nah.

appbeza
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Now, this has been executed wonderfully.

appbeza
She Woke Up discussion 16 Mar 23:20
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Then, Nozomi, who was watching her girlfriends flirting from a corner, wants in

You just made this already great doujin even more amazing. Let this be a thing!!

OT3 always a good thing

We need more poly :)

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Exersex.

appbeza
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Implicit engagement :D

appbeza
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POLY! POLI! POLe!

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Nice profile image, Jess.