Instead of a lick, that totally should have been a kiss. EVERYBODY wanted it to be a kiss. This author can go suck a fuck.

^ It's a line of dialogue that male pedestrians of certain types would randomly say in Grand Theft Auto III. Always gave me a chuckle.

No one saw the hand in the last page? What's with that hand!

I'm wondering if that was a mistake or intentional. She's never had anything close to resembling a human hand so far.

"Fetish levels rising!"

"We've got a containment breach in the forward section!"

"Seal off all bulkheads in fr--"

BOOM

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Excuse me, I need to go lie down...

^ You twist them clockwise to loosen, and counterclockwise to tighten.

"Not only are we both girls, but I'm your subordinate as well."

INTERNAL SCREAMING

"They love each other, what is the harm?"

This has been my mantra for years now. I love how careful this story is to not depict anything that could be considered abuse on the part of Ayako. Anybody decrying this story either hasn't read it, or is in total denial over its actual contents.

I hope Taiyaki adds something, a small word frame or some other common device, to remind readers at the beginning of a chapter that it's a flashback. I can understand not using the black borders, since there's flashbacks within the flashbacks, but I had no clue what was going on when I got to chapter 12 because there was no "X years ago" or anything to denote a change in time period.

Totally unrelated to anything at all, but I thought of this song this morning. This is my high school years right here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HQt6jIKNwgU
Savage Garden - I Want You

Actually, developed countries where prostitution is illegal never jail prostitutes themselves, but only those who profit from it and coerce others into it. The fear of being arrested is rarely there. But the fear to get deported back to their country is there, whether prostitution is legal or not.

In a state where prostitution is legal, like Nevada, an exploited illegal who would come to report to the authorities would get a thank you, then would be deported in the same beat.

Legalization is hypocritical. It never stopped the illegal parts. It just allows the "authorities" to have their share of the cake.

I wasn't talking about illegals. That's an entirely separate problem. If they weren't being exploited sexually, they'd be exploited another way. That's a problem with human beings and greed. Legalization is in no way hypocritical. It allows people to do what they would do anyway without wasting law enforcement resources on problems that shouldn't even exist. Regulation allows taxation, which funds public services, as I'm sure you know. You think pimps are paying taxes on illegal prostitution? Gimme a fucking break. Will legalization stop illegal prostitution? Of course not. But it will give a better option to people.

Or maybe she's slowed it to make it last longer.

I'd really recommend anyone who hasn't read Nuru Yuri to read it. It's so adorable.

^ How did you not notice? She's right up in you.

Put the brakes on the slurs there please, Johnny. That's extremely unnecessary to get your point across.

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Their mother is also struggling and confused, but the dad is an abusive shithead who treats his kids like shit just because he's never bothered to understand them. You shouldn't hold an abused child responsible for lashing out in frustration.

So he’s your average Japanese father then?

Maybe you should leave the commentary to the adults.

The inclusion of Mari was a little awkward, but other than that this was so cute.

I think the bottom of the picture was cut off. So unfortunate.

This isn't tagged as marriage? Because that looks suspiciously like a wedding dress.

Edit: OOH! Now that's what I'm talkin' about.

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Goodness gracious...is it hot in here?

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Inverted nipples are like the toy in a box of cereal.

I'd really like a whole doujin about these two. NSFW of course.

This is so out of character for Mai that it just seems more bizarre than an episode of Nichijou.

"She's mine. Don't even think about it."