I didn't like this story. It wasn't fluffy enough or give the characters enough development to actually care.
Fluffy's not Takemiya's strong point, she's more of a mischievous plots kind of author.
man how do people forget that most of her work is about fluffy love. love flicker, love story logs, kila kila, steps, and most of her one shots are some of the greatest fluff on this website imo. she gives just enough conflict in her stories to give the characters depth, and that just makes it even sweeter.