FLAWLESS VICTORY

FATALITY!

No! It’s FRIENDSHIP!

Too dark for me. I’m out.

Ummm, No.

“A secret admirer is the same as a stalker with stationary!”—Dimitri Martin, comedian. From his “Sames and Opposites” track. The rest is funny to listen to on YouTube.

This picture is enjoyable to look at.

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Nice

My favorite!

I don’t know who’s better: Yuriwhale or this artist?

Excelente!

That’s not spanking! That’s a sunburn!

Now to chapter 2: I never thought I’d see a character use phrenology in a manga (forehead massage). Outstanding work in putting that in to portray a character’s personality and manipulative aspects in story.

I’m hooked on this story... I’m interested to see if this goes towards a dream-like happy end or a more dramatic and tragic end for a girl lacking the scruples to watch out for pitfalls in sex trade. I’m leaning towards the happy end because that sells more copies if it gets licensed elsewhere.

Lots of room to interpret this manga, and I’m not as gifted at expressing viewpoints as well as others on this website, so I’ll just observe the flame wars on this thread for fun.

A NEW KISHI TORAJIROU!!!???

This gotta be, like, a dream come true or something.
And it has NSFW too! Omgomgomg!
Just give it some time and it will be the new Maka-Maka, uhihihihihihi.

I just realized Maka-Maka isn't on here.

It’s licensed. So it won’t be here.

Drat.

You can read it on mangago ;)

Thank you! I’ll look it up!

Why y'all having heated discussions about serious topics on a comedy yuri manga lmao

It’s part of what makes this website so fun... flame wars over insignificant things which no one in real world would bother listening to.

Wow, I hope you people never see an actual "flame war" or even a real "heated discussion"--you'd need to change your diaper.

No need to change diapers... the moderators on this website are good at stomping trolls.

In fact, I don’t consider it a squabble until Nez-Chan says her piece of mind to shut everyone up. And the ones who really ask for getting banned just keep commenting away... pretty funny to me when trolls always want the last comment even when doing so gets them booted off the website.

@ Amersion_: Yes, I am! And I do this like comedian Andy Kaufman-style... yes, a user name matching the craziness of grading artwork on a yuri manga website points to someone having time on their hands to have fun at assuming the role of someone taking the art seriously enough to grade them here.

This is my way of saying thank you on a free website—free critiques on a free website... I hope someone sees the humor in that. I guess my punchline has been made.

I was hoping for this to catch on in making comments more lively in images and elsewhere on this website.

@elevown: Thanks for advice! Computer aided drawing would do that in a jiffy.

^ (zooming in on picture—oh! Didn’t see that!). Thanks for pointing them out! I’d normally associate hickies with red instead of darker color. Good eyes you have!

Why y'all having heated discussions about serious topics on a comedy yuri manga lmao

It’s part of what makes this website so fun... flame wars over insignificant things which no one in real world would bother listening to. It’s kinda like overhearing English Literature majors arguing over the symbolism used in “Oliver Twist” while they’re working at Denny’s restaurant. How hilarious!

A fine completion of a cute manga. Sales will be good with this one. Looking forward to it’s licensing.

A NEW KISHI TORAJIROU!!!???

This gotta be, like, a dream come true or something.
And it has NSFW too! Omgomgomg!
Just give it some time and it will be the new Maka-Maka, uhihihihihihi.

I just realized Maka-Maka isn't on here.

It’s licensed. So it won’t be here.

Excellent! Haven’t read it yet, but I know mangaka is one of the best!

"There are tons of lesbian couples that don't work out just because each of them are women"
This statement feels odd or off for some reason

Yeah, I agree. It’s better to just say, “There are tons of lesbian couples that don’t work out just because of not going to the gym together or because of bed death.”

Wow, it’s gonna take a long time for English version to get published. I might forget this series by the time it gets wrapped up... I mean, there’s no advertising for the series once it is licensed. I’d figure readers here would pick it up if the last chapter is finished and uploaded here for free.

Honorable mention.

^ No, guitar lesson! (It’s out of frame)

Hands need work... like tendon lines to show tensing during orgasm.

Kudos for staying in bounds of ecchi (so far), but the bra should be pulled up... how could she go directly to cunnilingus? She’s got to get her in the mood first!

A little more shading for musculature, no need for bodybuilder contour lines. The ones you have is plenty enough. I’m saying this because you’re already using color.