On the first page it should be “Quietly stands the mansion of the masters I serve.” since stands is referring to the singular mansion instead of the plural masters.

The fact that she can't do anything to her sister as retaliation . . . .

Sure she can. It probably works both ways, so she’s just gotta bang the mistress at an inopportune time for her sister.

I don’t think such a time exists is the problem.

While interesting, I don’t think our protagonist is particularly bright given her supposed age. For one it would be REALLY easy to determine which day was chosen. She just needs to keep a journal and mark down a number for each day. Which ever number is kept when the next day comes around is the day that was chosen.

Also, it would be actually pretty easy to prove what’s happening with the help of 1 other person. This person wouldn’t even have to know about her condition. Simply ask them to generate an word file with a ton of randomized words. The next day after the word file is generated she’ll ask to be told a specific number word in the sequence. Whenever a day is chosen she can reiterate all the words she learned from the days that weren’t chosen, proving she has information she couldn’t have.

the first idea is good, i think, but as for the second, how would anyone but her know what the correct strings of words from non-chosen days were in order to check?

The person who generated the list would know. They would generate the list a day before beginning the experiment so that it would remain fixed.

While interesting, I don’t think our protagonist is particularly bright given her supposed age. For one it would be REALLY easy to determine which day was chosen. She just needs to keep a journal and mark down a number for each day. Which ever number is kept when the next day comes around is the day that was chosen.

Also, it would be actually pretty easy to prove what’s happening with the help of 1 other person. This person wouldn’t even have to know about her condition. Simply ask them to generate an word file with a ton of randomized words. The next day after the word file is generated she’ll ask to be told a specific number word in the sequence. Whenever a day is chosen she can reiterate all the words she learned from the days that weren’t chosen, proving she has information she couldn’t have.

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I was definitely put off at first, because yeah, this story wreaks of colorism. But once you get to the kid way the story clears up that’s it’s not that she’s obsessed with tanning, a normal thing someone has the right to choose, she is specifically burning her skin repeatedly, which gives you cancer. But even with that, the colorism is still there.

After reading the oneshot, I kind of understand the reasoning for Not het tag.

You do? Cause I don’t. We’ve probably got a solid dozen of this exact story on here, and none of them needed the tag.

^^Some people have body hair. This is normal.

a little annoyed that the "fat" character isnt chubby AT ALL....I really dont know if the artist cant draw chubby or thinks that having big boobs makes you fat...

The idea would be to at least pretend to have read the first chapter next time.

What are you even trying to say with that? There’s only one chapter to read at this point.

I mean the climax of the chapter was the girl's literally playing with the President's body fat, so I think accusing the person complaining of not reading the chapter is pretty valid.

Yeah that's valid, my bad, I was too annoyed to read more than a few pages. That's what I get for commenting my frustrations instead of keeping it myself lol

Well, I did read it, and she’s only “fat” in the loosest and meanest interpretation of the word.

a little annoyed that the "fat" character isnt chubby AT ALL....I really dont know if the artist cant draw chubby or thinks that having big boobs makes you fat...

The idea would be to at least pretend to have read the first chapter next time.

What are you even trying to say with that? There’s only one chapter to read at this point.

So they're tearing the place down with students in it, and without warning? There were still students walking in and out, and it did seem to take them by surprise. Shouldn't they be redirected to a new building that would have to be there first as well?

I am all for suspending disbelief, but come on.

Was it the whole school? When homegirl came and told them they needed to leave it made it sound like they were in an unused building hiding out to not do clubs. I just assumed it was a building not part of the actual school

No matter how you look at it, this is clearly not a building being prepped for demolition. All the books and furniture are still present. That and construction crews don’t get to just shrug and say, “well I didn’t THINK anyone was inside.”

I guess idiots CAN catch colds.

Oh no. Those eyes. Girls I think she KNOWS.

Hey, have we ever seen Alice smile like that outside of a “play” scene? Just genuinely happy and normal?

For fucks sake. Those prices at the end are INSANE. Capitalism has destroyed out oceans, the most lenticular resource in the world, and now they get to overcharge us like it’s a luxury.

Everything about this was perfect but Honoka's reaction about answering while Eli was in sleep was perfecter.

Also I wish Kanae from the initial chapters could see her chad self now.

She really has! She’s come so far and grown so much, and has the girlfriend of her dreams.

^^Huh? Her other hand? It’s too far away to be near anything juicy. It’s clearly on her, OH you mean hand holding. Yeah gotta censor that.

I don’t this those are gills Kurookami.

Best friends had a top alpha and bottom omega

Couldn’t get into that one, I lost interest when the alpha raped her and then the manga kept trying to convince me that it was the omega’s fault and she was the bad one for trying to leave. And then tried to convince me that the omega being angry at the alpha “irrationally” for putting her in vulnerable positions when she was younger muddied the waters somehow.

That’s my problem with ABO. Sometimes it’s fun. Sometimes it makes it really easy for people to justify r*pe and put systems of oppression in their fic and then cape for them.

Best friends was my first introduction to ABO and after the rape scene, I was completely turned off by the genre, aside from the fact that the whole scenario in general is so fucking weird. Then I looked at the history and some other stories and omegaverse immediately because one of the most disgusting things I’ve seen online. I hate when a new one shows up cause I’ll probably read it out of morbid curiosity because they genuinely make me sick

This made me want to check the series out just to see what a clusterfuck it was. And wow…. That sure is a lot of rape and I’m not sure the author is aware that’s rape. I like Yandere’s, but only when the story is sufficiently aware that the character is a psychopath.

https://youtu.be/dl53eN_do_0
Feels like a reference to this.

Hmmm, Pesca’s powers seem very similar to Alice’s. She can is able to “set a scene” and make people play to their roles.

It’s not Marisa’s fault. Have you SEEN Kawayabug’s Reimu? She’s lethally pretty.

Wasn’t even honking of playing along until you started showing me the face of a maiden.

Frightening cause she probably knows Kiara has revived from worse.

When you recognize an artists fetish before their art….

Oh this is DELICIOUS.