Geez Haniwa really likes Utena. This is the second Utena reference I've seen, after randomly choosing four of their doujins to read. The shadowy girls scene is a bit too on the nose lol.

I liked it though, the entire story. I have not read Inaba of the Moon and Earth, so Reisen's not a character I'm deeply familiar with. It's a story which tries to connect to Imperishable Night though and I think it succeeds.