Hm, this felt like a fanfic. A bit strange and kinda detached from the original. Art was nice, a bit too over the top maybe. And I was hoping for a threesome, Yuffie always just ends up masturbating or getting molested by random guys in doujins.
I guess it would be the easiest if Aya went to school again and meet new people. Or hang out with the helping lady at least. I don't see how anyone involved in the triangle could build a healthy relationship with each other.
The art ist cute, but I don't see any comedy (or romance). Ami really feels like a mean-spirited straight girl like someone said before. I guess she had a thing for her teacher and now behaves similar to her? But at this point, the only payoff I'm waiting for is a slap.
Still not sure what the villains' deal was. Sie wanted to control her but still live a "normal" life without her? Did she really have an abortion? Did she do this to herself? Bit confused about that. Both couples were cute though and the ending was nice.
I guess Yoshiko was always greedy for Junko, so now she is on the dark side as well. Even her expression is similar to hers now. I still like to imagine it's somewhat salvageable in the near future. It doesn't feel like Junko will keep going on like this for very long.
It would be interesting if Junko gets absolutly crushed by her workplace (maybe because of her superior or an even worse rival) and has to relay on Hashimoto more.