This is looking ok! hope it isn't too short..

Are there pages missing? Are these being uploaded out of sequence?

That was good. I want more.

The shortness of these chapters is starting to get to me with this one too...

The shortness of these chapters is starting to get to me...

Pointless cheesy scenes with cringy dialogues seem to be most people's cup of tea, yeah.

Well... that is seemingly the entire point to Citrus ...

last edited at Oct 31, 2017 6:28PM

that was very… very… jumbly

Liked the art style, liked the charter design, story was lumpy.

I'm falling in hate with this.

sadly no one was eaten by bears in this manga, maybe next time.

Oh, I think they mean like, when you tag people on facebook or discord, and the person gets a notif that they were "summoned"/replied to
Dynasty doesn't have that tho, you'll have to look at the forums and see if there are new posts in the threads you're interested in. You have no idea if someone replies to you, you'll have to check the threads out yourself to know
Unless Dynasty has some kind of feature I've been missing out on this entire time

There are forum archetypes that do this but thankfully dynasty doesn't because what you end up with is a irritating facebookesque mess of a place… like crunchy roll...

last edited at Dec 14, 2016 8:58PM

aaaannnnnd I think I'll stop reading this one. I just don't have the patience for this author any more.

Hey look, tags that are actually actuate!

Cute. Also this needs a Puking tag.

not enough puking validate to that.

last edited at Dec 6, 2016 2:33AM

kind of a letdown from the title…. I was expecting… more...

THAT WAS TOO SHORT!

I normally like this mangaka, but, this, no, I just dislike this, the concept and the main character just really annoy me.

"my hole is overflowing with good feelings"

w-what

my thoughts exactly

B-But which hole?

You just made it worse lmao

Limiting the conceptual implications of the overflowing of holes in a symbolic and psychological sense as well as an actual be it physical sense is dangerous...

Lumpy, uneven, trying too hard.

Don't talk about me that way.

Even if it is true.

LOL! … and no comment :D

Why should we assume smut is always stupid?

Smut is only as stupid if it is exacted as such… this though.. it's more scatterbrained and air headed than stupid.. I almost liked it.. but for the lumpiness

last edited at Oct 9, 2016 8:38PM

Lumpy, uneven, trying too hard.

FINALLY SOMETHING ACTUALLY INTERESTING!!!!!

This has a sort of lumpiness to the writing...

"I'm going to spew blood, let me fly"

…

ok..

:)

That was a overly cute chapter ^_^

maybe we all wouldn't be so upset.
nope, still would be, that just the way it is.