SPOILERS (Maybe)
From the get go this manga has been pretty bullshit. Making me pay and shit. like god damn, $40 is probably what I spent to read this shit. Fuck, I don't mind spending that much if it was actually worth it, but after reading all the latest chaps, to me it's clearly not. I may and likely will continue paying to read the rest anyway cause now i'm invested, I can't go back now, those motherfuckers.
So now here goes me me hoping and wishing for better writing in yuri, once again. The only 10/10 that can be given to this manga is the art. Like holy shit, yuri needs more of that style, hell yeah. The writing lately, though, like what the hell? Like shit, I'm not a writer but god damn they fucked up. I really wish I could change it and now i'm grieving here cause I can't and they neither can they. Even if the author tries to fix what happened in the latest chaps, the manga, in my opinion will no longer be realistic (was it ever really?) it's now become like the citrus manga (which started strong? nah mei's kiss with male teacher was enough to tell me how that manga gonna turn out) a manga where it's really got one or two really good elements (the art) about it but other than that, that's it. Cliche, cliche, cliche. May as well be reading a lame het manga.
So, the art for both mangas are soo amazing but art only goes so far to truly make a manga a good worth read, shit I've read yuri manga where I can see the art doesn't compare like these but the story, yessss, the writing, ahhh, just makes it all close to perfect honestly and really hits the spot. Now it's just like oh well I guess this is better than nothing huh, at least the arts beautiful. It's bullshit cause I really liked this manga for awhile (I think?) but now how can I when I don't like how the author developed it? I read the aftermath of the author too, he/she knew they fucked up. Like fuck dude you had one amazing job that you truly fucked up imo. Just sucks. This manga had potential. Now it may as well be soft core porn, only good for looks but not if you want plot.
Here's some examples of the best completed yuri manga: Girl Friends (my first), Cirque Arachne, Comprehensive Tovarisch (not all out but hell yeah so far), Hoshikawa Ginza District 4, Husky and Medley, Kimi Koi Limit (warning love triangle, I'm not a fan of the tag but the manga, yasss), Kimochi no Katachi, Majyo to Houki to Kurobuchi Megane, Notes From The Garden Of Lilies, Poor Poor Lips, Prism (cancelled but shit was so good, it's a shame the author turned out to be a yuri hating sadist, cough Stretch cough), Roommates, Shinigami Alice, The Flower And The Star, Unchanging Days, Yuri Yuri (ELEGY SYNDROME), and Yuri Yuri are all the my favorite completed yuri mangas on dynasty. I can probably add a whole bunch of ongoing ones that I'm really loving at the moment (if they don't fuck it up in a chap or in the end, they're always a risk) and oneshots (got so many that I love).