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joined Oct 4, 2016

I am in the midst of writing a Saejima/Ichiha (from Valkyrie Drive) BDSM doujin that I hope to get illustrated, and hopefully it will be better written. Only time will tell.

Remember, second, third and fourth drafts are your friends.

By my count, I think I'm on Draft #17.

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joined Sep 21, 2014

I am in the midst of writing a Saejima/Ichiha (from Valkyrie Drive) BDSM doujin that I hope to get illustrated, and hopefully it will be better written. Only time will tell.

Remember, second, third and fourth drafts are your friends.

By my count, I think I'm on Draft #17.

Not good enough, you need to go further

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joined Jun 28, 2012

I am in the midst of writing a Saejima/Ichiha (from Valkyrie Drive) BDSM doujin that I hope to get illustrated, and hopefully it will be better written. Only time will tell.

Remember, second, third and fourth drafts are your friends.

By my count, I think I'm on Draft #17.

Well, careful not to *over*polish, too. It's easy to get caught up in tweaking minutae and spinning your wheels.

23519190_1784036034940610_3865802561690641399_n
joined Oct 4, 2016

I am in the midst of writing a Saejima/Ichiha (from Valkyrie Drive) BDSM doujin that I hope to get illustrated, and hopefully it will be better written. Only time will tell.

Remember, second, third and fourth drafts are your friends.

By my count, I think I'm on Draft #17.

Well, careful not to *over*polish, too. It's easy to get caught up in tweaking minutae and spinning your wheels.

I hear ya. My current issue is that I have crafted Act I and Act III, and I am 98% happy with them. But Act II is proving to be elusive.

joined Feb 1, 2014

I understand this story is somewhat focused around BDSM, but I really can't get down with the main character basically assaulting the waitress in the bathroom without her consent. Consent is so important, especially in BDSM. I know it's a fictitious story, but depicting consent in these and other situations is really important and I think needs to be represented more.

Dynasty
joined Sep 9, 2013

"Nieve" in page 1 on chapter 14.

I swear every time I see Peta, I feel like calling PETA...at least that would be more interesting than this mess of the story (you can say I could stop but I really like to read/watch bad stories, helps me understand what not to do when comes to stories).

last edited at Oct 31, 2016 3:39PM

Stardusttelepath8
joined Oct 15, 2014

I like how the thumbnails for ch12+13 are lined up in the Most Popular of Past 7 Days section right now

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joined Sep 21, 2014

I like how the thumbnails for ch12+13 are lined up in the Most Popular of Past 7 Days section right now

Felt like preserving this sight

Ran-lossy
joined Mar 22, 2015

I looked through the raws and from what I can tell I'm actually really liking the story.

It's kind of in the tradition of Harlequin/Paperback Romance (not necessarily the company but books associated with that style), something I wish that lesbian stories could have more of. It's not that the current offerings don't offer good romance with great role models of real actual relationships you'd want to emulate, but there is something I find lovably trashy about the nature of Harlequin that is nice to get to read with lesbians.

I RILLY wish one of the two protagonists had dark hair, because I often find them impossible to tell apart.

Looks like new updates are delayed because the author is redoing it in color for an unspecified reason. I was pretty confused at why the newest raw had no tones until I read that. So you'll get your wish. :)

last edited at Nov 12, 2016 2:29AM

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joined Sep 25, 2013

I RILLY wish one of the two protagonists had dark hair, because I often find them impossible to tell apart.

Looks like new updates are delayed because the author is redoing it in color for an unspecified reason. I was pretty confused at why the newest raw had no tones until I read that. So you'll get your wish. :)

Sorry to tell you bad news but we won't publish color version ^^"

Ran-lossy
joined Mar 22, 2015

I RILLY wish one of the two protagonists had dark hair, because I often find them impossible to tell apart.

Looks like new updates are delayed because the author is redoing it in color for an unspecified reason. I was pretty confused at why the newest raw had no tones until I read that. So you'll get your wish. :)

Sorry to tell you bad news but we won't publish color version ^^"

Ahhh, is it for selling commercially? Well, it's fine by me. I prefer it Black and White and have no problem telling them apart. :)

last edited at Nov 12, 2016 1:30PM

23519190_1784036034940610_3865802561690641399_n
joined Oct 4, 2016

I am in the midst of writing a Saejima/Ichiha (from Valkyrie Drive) BDSM doujin that I hope to get illustrated, and hopefully it will be better written. Only time will tell.

Remember, second, third and fourth drafts are your friends.

By my count, I think I'm on Draft #17.

Well, careful not to *over*polish, too. It's easy to get caught up in tweaking minutae and spinning your wheels.

I hear ya. My current issue is that I have crafted Act I and Act III, and I am 98% happy with them. But Act II is proving to be elusive.

In the unlikely event that anybody cares, I have finished my script and would be interested in some beta testers. Dunno how I'd get it to you privately, though. I guess you can PM me over on Reddit under the same username if you want.

Download
joined Dec 5, 2016

This really got my attention now.

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joined Dec 11, 2016

waiting for new update . . . T_T

joined Jan 8, 2014

its been awhile is a new update upcoming? and how far is the raw along vs the translations? just curious since the story is getting better by the ch...

Best Mangaka Rohan
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joined Dec 13, 2016

Still hoping they will get the time to translate it.

I really liked the setting of this manhwa(?)

last edited at Jan 18, 2017 12:29AM

joined Feb 2, 2016

The mistress story is on haute?
Thank you who ever answered

Ran-lossy
joined Mar 22, 2015

Well there hasn't been a new chapter of the Thai version since November so even if they go on hiatus for the translation they're not really getting behind.

Yuu
joined Mar 28, 2015

Just can't take this seriously.

Money_marie%202
joined Jan 18, 2017

Just can't take this seriously.

I can't agree more.

Dark_Tzitzimine
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joined Dec 18, 2013

That was pretty cute.

And the art has improved!

Kat%202
joined Mar 6, 2012

I want to be with her! and love her! But because i need the story(?) to keep going.. I must act like i don't care!

UranusAndNeptuneAreJustCousins
joined Sep 6, 2015

Well... it is not as awful as the first chapters, so... improvement. I guess. Forced drama is still forced, though.

01
joined Dec 13, 2013

just tell her you liker her jfc

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joined Mar 26, 2014

Omg are we finally going somewhere? Breaths in
I smell Yuri! Woooooo! Won't be long now, brethren!

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