I will be honest. No matter what doujin or scenario, the way canon Fate Illya was present with Illya having incest crush on her own brother and it being rubbed against fans' faces every few episodes , i stopped counting the series anything near yuri.

Every yuri? scene in series seemed so forced and unnecessary. It seems the author himself have no idea what yuri is

As for this doujin, the art is okay. Those some good moments but nothing out of ordinary.

Ah! AWWWWW! That ending....smh what a way to finish, had me lol

Glad this was done, got the physical copy and I had wondered about it.
The unfortunate part is that they didn't pay quite enough attention to Sapphire, she should be a 6 pointed star, not 5 like Ruby >_>

Oh and awesome that they did the authors notes at the end, really appreciate when translators do those.

last edited at Oct 28, 2016 2:58AM

First I was thinking it was ok..But after page 13 it is a very bad hentai.
Futhermore my favo ship is still KuroXIllya ;)

Sexualizing lolis is not okay guys. Can't read this shit

Sexualizing lolis is not okay guys. Can't read this shit

You really need to come up with something other than "This is disgusting I hate this! It's terrible!" on every one of your comments.

Just avoid the tags you hate and save yourself the trouble.

Just want to say that "Kalevala scans" as a name and that graphic absolutely rock.

First page is like...

"FUCK YOU. WE'RE GOING STRAIGHT TO THAT SCENE. I DONT CARE WHAT YOUR OPINION IS, SCREW YOU."

last edited at Jan 4, 2018 3:03PM

This is definitely not part of God’s plan